My brain is empty of ideas,
But full of OCD;
At some point it’ll switch around again π.
Out of curiosity I just looked up the definition of ‘Haiku’ since lately it’s become as common as the word ‘and’, and as somebody who hates arbitrary rulesβ my god is a Haiku restrictive. You’ll never see me write a Haiku nor any other ‘named’ writing shape, except ironically.
Haiku (δΏ³ε₯) is a type of short form poetry originally from Japan. Traditional Japanese haiku consist of three phrases that contain a kireji, or “cutting word”, 17 on (phonetic units similar to syllables) in a 5, 7, 5 pattern, and a kigo, or seasonal reference. Similar poems that do not adhere to these rules are generally classified as senryΕ«.
Wikipedia
I struggle to believe that anything of value or importance could be expressed within 5, 7 and 5 syllables per line. I tried to re-write the poem above as a Haikuβ¦impossible! Single words will instantly exhaust the syllable ‘allowance’ π. I also really wonder how well such an extreme form of writing would transfer between such different languages as Japanese and English.
Eventually,
All vegetation must die;
It’s f**king Winter.
King in ‘t North says:
Everyone’s gunna diiiiiie;
Winter be comin’!
(That was completely ironic and no fun whatsoever).
Nae more ideas,
Snowed under with OCD;
Summer will arrive.
πͺ
Time to try Dadaist poetry π
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Haha, what’s that? Is it like Dad jokes or Dad dancing by any chance? π€
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A critic in the American Art News asserted in this regard that:
“the Dada philosophy is the sickest, most paralysing and most destructive thing that has been thought up by the human brain.” (by wiky) π€
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“In 1917 he submitted the now famous Fountain, a urinal signed R. Mutt, to the Society of Independent Artists exhibition but they rejected the piece
Art world experts polled by the sponsors of the 2004 Turner Prize, Gordon’s gin, voted it “the most influential work of modern art”
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The poem Dada is very funny ππππ writing it does great! π
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Haha π
Cut out words from a newspaper, shake them in a bag and write them down? π€π€π€. Amazing π
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There is no comparison with haiku… π
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Trueβ¦I guess my enemy’s enemy is my friend π.
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Yesssss π
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Dada… π
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Hahaha! Stop it π
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:-X π
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Oh, I dunno.
Poetry forms can be as interesting to explore as throwing the rule book away entirely…
But however you write has to feel natural (and possibly fun too), I’ll give you that ππ€
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I should just say – I’ve only ever written one intentional Haiku myself. Although I was quite proud of it at the time, it’s a skill set I definitely do not possess ππ€
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I’ve written more than you now then! π
It’s a skill? Lol xD
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Deffo a skill ππ€
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I am a skillful individual βΊοΈ
Not an African bum disease π€¦ββοΈ. How racist was that anyway π
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I have no idea π€π€
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At school kids used to say “Oi mate have you got skill?”
“Yes”
“Aahahaha you’ve got an African bum disease!”
As if the fact it’s African makes it more embarrassing π€¦ββοΈπ€¦ββοΈ
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Never heard that in my life before…
Schoolkids eh? No rhyme or reason to any of the nonsense they come up with! π€
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I just added a final one to the end of the post which actually is a re-write of the starting poem π€£.
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I like it ππ€
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Yesss ππ
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Ach, perhaps! I just found it needlessly hard work and I wasn’t even trying π.
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I admire those who can pull it off but wouldn’t attempt it myself. That first one of yours though–that’s a winner!
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I think I’ve discovered the key is extremely reductionist thinking is required for those, lol.
And thanks! π
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I like your haikus! I’m an oddball who finds the use of profanity in haiku oddly satisfying.
I’ve heard that there are other micropoetry forms that have emerged as alternatives to haiku for languages where the 5-7-5 syllable doesn’t work as well in that language. Still, I totally hear you re: haiku and micropoetry forms generally. I don’t think the microforms are that conducive to developing meaning. Sure, I’ve seen some examples of haiku that are impressive, powerful, beautiful and amazing, but micropoetry forms generally irritate me more often than not.
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Haha, thanks! That’s not oddball behaviour π.
Yes I agree with all that. I can see how such short forms work well with reductionismβ such as my latest poem. There’s a good synergy there. Even in fact minimalism seems to be an aspect of Japanese culture in general? I guess syllable counting could be a way of practising reductionist discipline, but it’s reductionism itself that holds the value.
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π it looks like fun to me….
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